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Story Thus Far:

The moment she was born and cleaned, they noticed her eye colors were different, from that point her parents had a suspicion that she was either possesed or cursed. But they accepted her anyway, with the hope that it might actually go away or return to normal, or that she might turn out to be happy and all their worries will have been for nothing. But as she got older and older, she never made a single friend in school, she was constantly bullied and pushed around, called a "Monster" a "Freak" or a "Cursed Demon". She would come home crying everyday, but when she saw her parents, she would dry her tears and smile for them...because she didnt want to make them worry. However they knew she was hurting inside.

1 day when her mother went to her room to see if she was hungry after school...she overheard her crying in her room....she heard her cursing at herself. Whining and crying...stating things like "Why was i even born?" or "I wish i was never born!" or even "I wish i was never born with these stupid eyes!". When her mother told the father about it...they couldnt figure out what to do about it. They considered pulling her out of school and homeschooling her...but they couldnt bring themselves to isolate their child anymore then she has already been isolated from the world. They finally decided that they would wait a bit longer...and hope things got better.

One day she returned home...but she was covered with cuts, bruises and dirt. When her parents asked what happened...she wiped her tears and said "I fell...im fine...." she then passed them and went to her room. It was at this point her parents got really worried...so they called up the school..and indeed confirmed that a bunch of kids after school pushed her to the ground and started beating her...calling her names simultaniously. They demanded from the school that they do everything they could to put a stop to it...the school promised they would talk to the kids who did it and punish them, and they would make sure they wouldnt do it again. But in reality the school board hated her too...and they didnt do what they said they would.

Eventually...3 more years of torture passed for her...she hadent made a single friend in her entire life up to this point. When she was in 6th grade however, 1 girl was brave enough to come over and start talking to her. At first she didnt trust her due to the way she had been treated all this time, but she realized that she could actually finally make a friend. The 2 girls became quick friends...and they were like sisters...they played together...laughed together and shared secrets with each other. They even visited each others houses sometimes. Miu's parents were relieved and overjoyed that she stopped coming home crying and that she finally made a friend...but as u know...all good things must come to an end. About 3 weeks after they became friends...something horrible happened that completely devastated her entirely. The friend she had made...the girl she had worked so hard to befriend...and the happiness she finally had obtained in all these years...it was all taken away...whisped away like it was never even there. The kids that had bullied her once before and beat her....had set their targets on her new friend....

1 day after school...as they were about to walk home...the kids grabbed them and started pushing them around...they pushed her down to the ground and kicked her over and over till she couldnt move...they then grabbed her friend and did the same...1 of them grabbed the nearest object...which was a large wooden stick..and started beating her with it...calling her a "Black Beast"...and "Disgusting Freak"...saying other things like "So your friends with this monster now?! That makes you a monster too!" "Monsters must Die and Dissapear!" She couldnt do anything but lye there watching her best friend get hurt...she was too weak and she hurt all over...and 1 of the kids had their foot on the back of her head...she couldnt move. As tears enveloped her eyes...blood started to appear on the ground and in the air. No matter how many times she cried out...they wouldnt listen. Eventually her friend stopped moving...and the kids got tired...when they finally stopped...they dropped the sticks and just left...1 of them spat on her and said "Hope you rot" Tears engulfing her eyes...it was like a rainstorm had started and her eyes were the clouds....With all the strength she had...she crawled over to her lifeless friend....unable to percieve if she was dead or not...when she reached over and looked at her lifeless eyes...she shook her over and over...but she didnt get a response...she kept shaking her and shaking her...eventually it actually started to rain. When she stopped shaking her...she just lowered her head and started hysterically crying on her friends corpse. Thunder Boomed in the skies...the rain poaring heavily on the 2 tormented souls...she eventually lifted her head and screamed in the air...her tears mixed in with the rain...as she fell over and collapsed from pain and anguish...when she awoke...she was back in her house.

She looked around...wondering if the whole thing had just been 1 bad dream...but when she tried to get up...she squinted as she felt pain on her body...she slid the covers down and looked at herself...noticing the wounds she got...she realized it wasnt a dream. She then started crying again...and the tears didnt stop. Her Parents heard her crying and came rushing to her room...when they opened the door and saw her breaking down in tears...her mother rushed over to her...and held her tightly...as tears formed in her eyes as well. Her father just stood there...clenching his fists in anger at how much torment and pain his daughter is going through. As he wept silently. About 3 months passed after the incident...Miu's parents had officially taken her out of school. Life for Miu was starting to get better...as she was enjoying herself with her parents. And by then...she had found out she was due to have a Little Sister. She was happy about this...very happy. But again...every good thing must come to an end.

1 day, on March 25th, the day where her entire life would change...finally happened. The Entire town had knocked on their house door. When her parents were about to answer it...they told Miu to go to her room and close the door and stay there...no matter what. She just nodded and went into her room...locked the door and sat on her bed. About 30 minutes passed...and she heard the front doors close. When she stared at her own doors...she heard her parents knock...she walked over and unlocked the door...and her parents faintly smiled...but were crying softly. When Miu asked what was wrong...her mother just dropped to her knee's and held her tightly...all Miu could say...was "Mom?" "whats wrong?" "Why are u crying?"...but she wouldnt answer her.

The Next day...her Parents woke her up earlier then usual...they told her to get dressed in her favorite clothes....and to take 1 thing that was most important to her...so she took her Red Scarft that her mother had bought for her a few days back. When she finally emerged from her room..her parents said "How about Breakfast?" "Are you hungry sweetie?"...she just nodded. After breakfast...they spent about an hour doing things that they loved to do as a family. Miu was having fun...but was confused as her parents usually never had this much time to spare. At around 2PM...her parents looked at each other...in dread. They told Miu to wait for them by the front door...Miu was thinking they were gonna go somewhere...but when their parents arrived at the door...they stared at Miu...and they suddenly looked angry...her Father opened the door..grabbed Miu by the back of her shirt...and threw her out the door. She got up and looked back at her parents...crying softly...she tried running back...then her mother said "Stay back!"...she froze. Her father then said "Miu...leave...and never come back...ur a wicked child and its better if u just leave town..."...Miu didnt know what to think...she just started crying histerically...almost like a baby when it loses its binky. She screached as she cried...and it was like ripping out someones heart...u could feel the aching in her heart. Her parents then closed the door...and her father softly said "...im sorry.."...but Miu didnt hear that...She then got up...still crying....and she walked away....to the entrance to the town...and to the entrance of a cursed forest that the village gate is said to protect them from. She had only heard legends but didnt believe them fully....So she ventured into the forest...taking 1 last look back at what was her home...tears overflowed her eyes again...as she turned back forward and walked into the cursed forest.

1 month passed...she was still in the forest. 1 Day, as she took her clothes off to bathe in the lake...then...as she was getting out of it...and she was about to finish putting on her clothes...she heard a noise...the bushes were shaking...fear suddenly engulfed her. She stood still and stared at the moving bush...she then saw a rabbit jump out...and run away...she sighed in relief...but as soon as she sighed...a man appeared from behind her and grabbed her by the arms...then 3 others emerged from the bushes. They all were laughing and stared at her...saying weird things like "Damn she's cute!"...1 of them said "She's freaking adorable...wtf is up with her eyes though?". As he was about to get a closer look...he was pulled back by the 3rd guy...who said "Hey! Dont get to close to her! I heard about those with 2 eye colors! They are said to be possed by the devil!". 1 of them tied her to the tree...and they all gathered and thought about what to do with her. Finally...they agreed to take all her stuff...and leave her. As they took her clothes & Food...they were about to take her scarf...when she screamed "Nooo!!!"...the man receded as he looked nervous..she then yelled "Take whatever you want, but PLEASE dont take this away from me! Its al i have to remember my mom!"...he then looked at the others and they nodded...he receded his hand completely..turned and walked away with the others.

Finally..after a bit of struggling...she got free of the ropes. Now bare naked...she continued to wander through the dense forest...until...after 2 more months...she made it out. When she emerged...the first thing she saw...was a giant city in the distance...she had heard stories of a modern city on the other side of the forest...but didnt believe it till now. So she started walking and made her way to the city. After a good 3 weeks worth of walking & Running. She had made it to the city...when she entered...she was fightened. Everything was huge...there were so many people...and the air smelt weird. She continued to delve deeper in the city. She now wanders the streets....looking for a purpose and meaning in the city...And more importantly..for a place she can live in peace...

For More Info On Her (Picture, Appearance, Personal Info):
http://chatango.com/fpix?nijumenohorosha

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omg, i DON'T NEED THIS SADNESS. -runs off crying-

if that was your goal with this, stinking pat yourself on the back.........

what is this joke?
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...so she's homeless but have chatango yea right


it's beyond sadness this is made up from...idk...it seems like middle ages to me,
if something similar happened in japan's inaka, it should have been 100 years ago...

is this the girl you know who have those eye discoloration thingy?



O_____O ... this story is beyond believable

mangakaninja wrote:what is this joke?
.O_____O ... this story is beyond believable

its nekos chatango profile, so of cource tiz not real,

good story either way, q.q

Damn sis........Just.....Damn......

sad story indeed

Stop making everyone CRY!!! XD

thats sad...

how can kids be so violent.....

Two eye colors is actually cool

the only thing i was wondering is how she survived in the forest

Setsuna wrote:thats sad...

how can kids be so violent.....

Two eye colors is actually cool

the only thing i was wondering is how she survived in the forest

could be a spell from the eragon book, a spell that would force the animals nearby to feed you, such as a bear catching fish for you, etc

Resources and Her eyes, even to animals, Heterochromia is looked at as dangerous and demonic. Thats how.

if she is seen as that wouldnt they run from her and stay away 0.o

edit: or did you mean like wild aggressive animals stayed away from her
then did she just like collect berries lol